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If I died today.
Would your world sway?

If I died tomorrow.
Would your heart be filled with sorrow?

If I died a week from today.
Would you know what to say?

If I died a month from now.
Would your head bow?

If I died in a year.
Would you shed a tear?

Or would you say what a shame?
A life taken in vain.
Would you remember the good?
Or just focus on all my faults?
If I cried for help.
Would it be your ears that heard my pleas?

As I lay in a box of satin.
Would you claim that you were my best friend till the end?
Would you make my eulogy thoughtful?
Would you tell everybody what a caring girl I was?
Would you talk about my giving nature?
Or would you secretly slip in some story about you?

If I died today.
Would you have the heart to say?
How dare she?
Would you be mad at me?
Would hate me for leaving you?
Would you forget me because of your anger?

If I died today.
Would you even remember my name tomorrow?
for those time you just wonder if.........
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keithdraws Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I'd remember your name Christina.
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BunnyFroofroo Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
If I cried for help? < I don't think that's a question.

Lovely. Sad, but what we all think deep down inside (: I'd miss you :hug:
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RavenSpider Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you i second guessed myself on that one i will fix it
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Daozen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
If you died at all,it would bring great sorrow and anguish.You're too important to leave this world Sis.
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RavenSpider Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you but lately i just don't fell that way
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Daozen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Well to me you're important whether you like it or not.
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RavenSpider Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you that makes you one of four that think that oops sorry make that five
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Daozen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
One of five?You mean your family and friends?I don't understand.
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RavenSpider Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i mean that besides you only four other people find me important
1 my daughter luna
2 my daughter analee
3 my stepson jamie (i put money on his food card for college)
4 my mom
5 you
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Daozen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Oooooh.Now I get it.Anyway,you're important to me and I'm here for you if you need anything.
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